Emotion-LOVE
LoveLove is the most beautiful thing in the world since Pandora opened the box.
Love means a strong feeling of affection, fond and tender attachment, it is a good emotion. I always feel love around me whenever at home or out of it, like the following example. About two years ago, I had an accident of my right eye, so that I had to stay in hospital. When in hospital, everyone worried about me, my parent putted away their jobs and stay with me, if I had a little pain or uncomfortable, they tried to make me feel better and happy. The love them give is true and pure, this is parent’s love, and I could strongly feel it in that time. As long as you open your mind to every little things around you, you will find love in everywhere.
posted by Ariel's castle @ 7:08 PM
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Some grammartical mistakes that I think they should be:" I had to stay in the hospital.", "When I was in the hospital","my parents", "The love they gave me is true and pure", "every little thing", "you will find love is everywhere." ^____________^
Good. You know about LOVE very well. I agree with that love between family members is the greatest in the world. You are very lucky having an admirable family.
Thank you, Emilylin. Your suggestions of grammatical correction are very good. They should be considered.
By the way, the time shown is wrong. Now it is 01:27 am on November 8.
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