Saturday, October 21, 2006

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Pet Memory
There are many people in Taiwan keeping dogs in their family, so did mine. Money was a big dog with blond, long, and beautiful hair, he was very smart and honest. We seem him as our family member.

When I was in 2 year-old, our neighborhood gave him for us when Money's mother giving birth. He was a baby dog then, I always carried him in my arms, after few monthes he grew up to a big dog. He was very big, so I always ride on his back and pretended I was riding a horse. He liked to play with people and was kind for them, although Money looked fierce, but actually he was a mild dog. We liked to play together and he always lap my face when we were playing, I thought he was my best friend.
Through the time gone, Money became an old dog, I could not ride on his back as I did in the past time, and he was not in full vigor anymore. He had already 11 years old, sometimes he just lied on the floor all day and only moved his eyes to see us when we close him. We were very worry about him. He had company us for a long time, we knew we could do nothing for him, and we had a picture in our mind, therefore, we just wait that day's coming.

Money had gone for almost 8 years, since Money's death, we have never keep dogs or pets. In my family’s photo album, we still can see Money, he was happy and handsome, we love him, and from his face we know, he loves us, too.

2 Comments:

At 8:59 AM, Blogger zu_en said...

我不知道我說的對不對,但是我覺得在描述和Money相處時的一些動詞的時態很像沒有用的一致!

 
At 6:17 PM, Blogger Jessica's said...

內容挺豐富 但要注意有一些文法上小錯誤唷!像是so did mine個人覺得是there are so many people keeping dogs in their family,so do I 會來的比較正確!are 是現在式後面也應該用do

 

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