Outline
Pet Memory~Outline~
1. Main idea:
a dog-Money when I was 2 year-old
2. Body
Money was a strong, young dog.
Looked fierce but he was mild.
Through the time gone, he became old.
He was died.
3. Conclusion
Money had gone for a long time, but he is still alive in our memory.
posted by Ariel's castle @ 11:37 PM
3 Comments:
Please write more in the Body section such as the appearance of Money, how you got it, the experience of living with it and so on.
怎麼辦???我的意見和老師差不多耶~~~
多說一點有關Money的事吧!!
OK. You can go ahead to write your essay. Good luck.
Post a Comment
<< Home